cinematography feedback and lr




1) Type up your feedback/comments from your teacher.

  • fantastic production so engaging, genuine emotional impact,narrtive constructed beautifully
  • wide variety of cinematography employed and generally labled accurately.
  • pace of editing made it a little difficult to keep up with the label with font choice also contributing to this.
  • crane shot- was it actually a crane shot?or would handheld be more appropriate? 
  • so creative in terms of framing and mise en scene 

2) Type up your feedback from fellow students.

  • music matched beautifully 
  • great job 

3) Now reflect on your work and write your own summary of the comments and feedback you have received. Write three WWWs and three EBIs.

WWW: effectively conveyed the emotion i wanted from the audience 

www- varied cinematography 

www- matched my script

EBI- slowed down editing so the text was more visible 

EBI- explored more diverse locations

EBI- more focus on mise en scene 


4) Learner response: think about what you learned about cinematography making the video and also watching others. What will you do differently when you start the coursework in the summer? What tips or tricks have you learned from others that you can use next time? Are there any specific aspects of camerawork that you need to revise or practice?

focus more so on using a variety of different angles and shots i need to practice using a tripod to make my shots more smooth and concentrated

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